Scores and Comments
19.c.ps.101.681
Ballet Etudes of South Florida, Inc.
Application Details |
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Proposal Type | General Program Support - Discipline-Based |
Request Amount |
$29,768
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Total Score | 431.000 |
Average Score | 86.200 |
Panelist Scores
Panelist | Excellence | Impact | Management | Accessibility | Total |
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Andree Dale | 33 | 30 | 18 | 7 | 88 |
Davis Tenaj | 37 | 28 | 20 | 10 | 95 |
Jenkins David | 33 | 23 | 15 | 9 | 80 |
Klein Kathleen | 36 | 26 | 18 | 10 | 90 |
Schnell Adam | 31 | 24 | 15 | 8 | 78 |
Comments |
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Andree Dale - Score: 88.000 | |
Is the company made up of students only outside of the guest artists? Not totally clear. questions about the budget - Artistic Director is listed under Administration - are the contracted revenue coming from performances, more thought needs to be put into Accessibility compliance, video is so edited it's difficult to see full engagement and quality of the dancers | |
Davis Tenaj - Score: 95.000 | |
Excellence: How are ‘at risk’ youth identified? Excellence: Please tell us about the partnership that coordinates programs for tittle 1 schools.(the sentence cuts off)
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Jenkins David - Score: 80.000 | |
Very well-written narrative explaining your goals, objectives, and activities. I especially appreciate the narrative explaining your programs and how they specifically foster mentorship and life skills outside of the arts. And, hey, I love that you have an objective of selling out every single show! :) Solid "measurables." I would, however, look back over the criteria for the activities section. You address your specific activities in other parts of the narrative, I just think they could have been more plainly laid out there. Your website appears to be offline? The URL you provided does not connect to a valid site. I would like to see a plan for how you will reach more followers on social media. Am I reading that right that you reach 1,200 combined across all platforms? How will you evaluate your overall programming and attempts to reach and engage with the community? Your evaluation plan seems to focus on the individual dancers only and organizationally? Impact in terms of people benefitted seems low to me versus the amount requested.
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Klein Kathleen - Score: 90.000 | |
SCHOOL? |
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Schnell Adam - Score: 78.000 | |
Please watch your proof reading. In the very first sentence of your proposal synopsis, there is a serious grammatical error. Your mission statement also has a major grammatical error in it. Also, where is your tuition income in the proposal budget? More detail on your outreach programs would be greatly appreciated. The "Cavalier" program sounds wonderful! |