Scores and Comments
19.c.ps.101.417
Emotions Dance Incorporated
Application Details |
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Proposal Type | General Program Support - Discipline-Based |
Request Amount |
$6,187
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Total Score | 429.000 |
Average Score | 85.800 |
Panelist Scores
Panelist | Excellence | Impact | Management | Accessibility | Total |
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Andree Dale | 32 | 25 | 18 | 10 | 85 |
Davis Tenaj | 40 | 27 | 20 | 10 | 97 |
Jenkins David | 33 | 24 | 18 | 9 | 84 |
Klein Kathleen | 34 | 25 | 16 | 8 | 83 |
Schnell Adam | 32 | 24 | 16 | 8 | 80 |
Comments |
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Andree Dale - Score: 85.000 | |
video collages don't give a sufficient opportunity to view the choreography, usually a 3 minute unedited segment is the best, very nice brochure reflects a well managed organization, projected budget for 2018 doesn't seem to take into account monies for proposed projects covered by this grant for 2018, still photos carry a dynamic not realized in videos, I feel the energy and passion of this group and their commitment to their community, however their success would be greatly enhanced by reaching out to mentors for critical choreographic input | |
Davis Tenaj - Score: 97.000 | |
{No comments provided.} | |
Jenkins David - Score: 84.000 | |
I appreciate the social/civic mission. The basic narrative doesn't really key me in on exactly what the funds will be used for? I would have liked more specific information in Marketing and Promotion. Numbers, reach, etc. Your total reach numbers seem very impressive considering your overall budget. Good luck!
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Klein Kathleen - Score: 83.000 | |
One support letter?
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Schnell Adam - Score: 80.000 | |
Please be careful with your proof reading and grammar usage. Less than excellent writing diminishes the impact of your proposal. I applaud your efforts at using dance to impact social change. While I understand you are a small organization, I think your program is perfect for more outreach and education initiatives which would garner you more grant and foundational support to help you grow. |